Lisa Squared Rewrite?

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Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby Wiimeiser » Sat Jun 20, 2009 3:15 am

I'm planning on rewriting Lisa Squared as a movie, there will be plot changes (the future bits will be nixed) but it will be overall the same plot.
I was wondering if I could do this? Also any ideas?

Thanks    :lisa:^2
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Re: Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby CalculatedChaos » Sat Jun 20, 2009 5:58 am

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Get your own ideas.
Nuff said.
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Re: Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby Terry » Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:01 am

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Re: Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby Wiimeiser » Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:59 am

L^2 is a classic. I think it needs to be written in a movie format. Graham?
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Re: Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby CalculatedChaos » Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:35 pm

http://www.lisa-simpson.net/topic/53.msg21269#msg21269

Pretty sure Graham made his intentions regarding you in relation to his writing clear right here.
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Re: Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby Wilde Gray Yonder » Sat Jun 27, 2009 8:52 am

Plagiarise
Let no-one else's work evade your eyes
Remember why the good Lord made your eyes
So don't shade your eyes
But plagiarise, plagiarise, plagiarise!

But remember always to call it "rewrite".

With apologies to Tom Lehrer.
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I rode past destruction in the ditches,
With the stitches still mending
'Neath a heart-shaped tattoo.
Renegade priests
And treacherous young witches
Were handing out the flowers
That I'd given to you.

- Bob Dylan, Changing of the Guards

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Re: Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby Archonix » Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:14 pm

Let me put it this way. No.
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Re: Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby Vanguard20 » Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:06 pm

Whats Lisa Squared?

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Re: Lisa Squared Rewrite?

Postby Wilde Gray Yonder » Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:48 pm

A Simpsons science fiction fic by Graham from waaaay back. In short, it's about the return of Lisa's twin sister, Suzy, who was supposed to have died at birth. Suzy has been held in a secret research facility together with other children, who are subject to treatment giving them various powers.

The first part can be read here. Graham was planning a rewrite, but this was never finished.
I struggled to my feet,
I rode past destruction in the ditches,
With the stitches still mending
'Neath a heart-shaped tattoo.
Renegade priests
And treacherous young witches
Were handing out the flowers
That I'd given to you.

- Bob Dylan, Changing of the Guards


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