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- Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:37 am
- Forum: Simpsons and Futurama Discussions
- Topic: REVIEW: Gone Maggie Gone
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2159
Re: REVIEW: Gone Maggie Gone
many people in nohomers club seemed to like it, but not i... i dunno, i thought the mystery writing here was too obvious, not too much 'tension' (yeah, the ring thing wasn't good enough for me either) and the rest of the episode wasn't really good either imo. i do agree that it was wacky since it ...
- Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:16 am
- Forum: Writing Help
- Topic: Help for my script... "Motorwrath"
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8176
Re: Help for my script... "Motorwrath"
Thanks Spy in Mancunia for spending your time modifying the faults! Yes, I edited my post along with your corrections... I'm right now working on Act 2. I may be able to post it in... next weekend or so because I'm a student during weekdays. Anyway, I know how the story should be set for Act 2; i...
- Sun Oct 19, 2008 2:06 pm
- Forum: Writing Help
- Topic: Help for my script... "Motorwrath"
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8176
Re: Help for my script... "Motorwrath"
Since I dunno how rtf. works, I'll just post the entire thing here. Then I'll edit along on this post Act 1 (OPENS with fast, stimulating and tensing music in the background while the view shows Homer’s sweaty, worried face) (The music continues and view now shows Homer driving inside the car; the ...
- Sun Oct 19, 2008 4:54 am
- Forum: Writing Help
- Topic: Help for my script... "Motorwrath"
- Replies: 4
- Views: 8176
Help for my script... "Motorwrath"
This is not a completed script yet--I'm only done with the first draft of act 1. I've decided to get some help this early because this time, I want to get some help and advise from you guys when the work is in the primary stage. Anyway, I've attached the file to the post. If you want the general ...
- Tue Sep 09, 2008 10:42 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: "Loved Bones" script
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3456
Re: "Loved Bones" script
So, er, any opinions?
- Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:14 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: "Loved Bones" script
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3456
Re: "Loved Bones" script
Alright it's completed ------------------------------ Act 3 (OPENS on a flower ground; Lisa is seen skipping with bunnies, ponies, raccoons and other furry animals and enjoying the moment) LISA (Hides her eyes; Takes out a book from thin air) Ah, what book would it be for today? (Opens the eye; gets...
- Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:35 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: "Loved Bones" script
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3456
Re: "Loved Bones" script
Act 2 (OPENS in the sky; Bart’s soul tearfully and desperately fight against the anti-gravity and pull himself down to the Earth) BART’S SOUL (Tearfully) Please! (Tries to snatch his halo, but his hands go through his halo) I have too much to live for! I have yet to drink mixed liquor drinks and mee...
- Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:34 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: "Loved Bones" script
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3456
"Loved Bones" script
The first two acts are finished and I'm working on 3rd act now (I know how the story will go, I'm just writing dialogues and stuffs now) It's also my second attempt of writing a complete script. Constructive criticisms are welcome Chalkboard Gag: Mrs. Krabappel did not say 'Let them eat cake' Couch...
- Tue Jul 15, 2008 1:03 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: 'Fat Bart' Script
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2674
Re: 'Fat Bart' Script
Whereas, for example, if you had Marge and Homer organise an elaborate rescue attempt, it would seem more worthy of all the build-up to this point. I actually had that as one of the options to end the episode, but I like the twist of showing what the audiences know while the character doesn't know ...
- Tue Jul 15, 2008 1:44 am
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: 'Fat Bart' Script
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2674
Re: 'Fat Bart' Script
The idea is fairly original: while the "fat camp" thing has been done before (I haven't seen the episode, though), as you pointed out, having Bart *wanting* to go there is nice and unexpected. The plot progresses nicely, and generally in the style of the show. I thought the resolution was...
- Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:41 am
- Forum: Finished Art
- Topic: Requests & Commissions
- Replies: 13
- Views: 17506
Re: Requests & Commissions
I don't know if it would be a good question to ask, but can anyone color this? I'd just like to see what it would be like if my arts were colored
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- Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:50 pm
- Forum: Simpsons and Futurama Discussions
- Topic: Colin graduated Yardale with an average of 4
- Replies: 36
- Views: 9913
Re: Colin graduated Yardale with an average of 4
Colin, Hugh Parkfield and Mr. Bergstrom make a good connection to themselves as Lisa's perfect male companion or role model. We don't know about Colin yet, but Hugh Parkfield and Bergstrom both share a similarity of being spoiled of Lisa's eye or view due to Homer's bumbling acts
- Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:47 pm
- Forum: Art Help
- Topic: Recommendations please. Questions included
- Replies: 2
- Views: 7546
Re: Recommendations please. Questions included
Wow, nice to see a new member with such good art! Thank you! I really like these. I think the characters' heads are occasionally too big, though, like Lisa's in the "The Adolescence" picture, or Milhouse's in the one above, and the hair sometimes looks a bit sketchy. I'll leave the more s...
- Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:16 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: 'Fat Bart' Script
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2674
Re: 'Fat Bart' Script
Act 3 (OPENS with bunch of tired fat kids slowly walking their way to the cafeteria for their ‘meal’; some are even seen crawling due to his or her tiredness) BART (Hopeful) Sweet diet pills! Oh, how I miss thou—(The camp counselor snatches Bart on the back) Woaah!! COUNSELOR Missing anything? BART ...
- Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:16 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: 'Fat Bart' Script
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2674
'Fat Bart' Script
Here's something that I did in NoHomersClub. I'd like an opinion from you guys. Thanks Blackboard Gag: The ability to lick my elbow is not enough to present in ‘Show and Tell’ Lisa’s Sax Tune: To the tune of ‘In the Mood’ Couch Gag: The original family comes in and gets bewildered by seeing the fu...