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by Sun-Wukong
Wed Apr 27, 2011 1:26 am
Forum: Simpsons and Futurama Discussions
Topic: REVIEW: Angry Dad: The Movie
Replies: 3
Views: 1162

Re: REVIEW: Angry Dad: The Movie

Best joke? The Roman Polanski reference. Agreed, but other than that I wasn't crazy about this episode. I thought the movie parodies were alright, but it seems like the only Pixar movie that anyone who tries to parody them has seen is the first Toy Story. I don't want to get on my soap box here, bu...
by Sun-Wukong
Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:30 pm
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: Complete Script: “Ces-(annoyed grunt)-da”
Replies: 3
Views: 2362

Re: Complete Script: “Ces-(annoyed grunt)-da”

Like I said before, I'm willing to change things that don't work. Please check out my newest draft, whoever reads this.
Ces-(Annoyed Grunt)-da.doc
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by Sun-Wukong
Sun Oct 10, 2010 8:55 pm
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: Complete Script: “Ces-(annoyed grunt)-da”
Replies: 3
Views: 2362

Re: Complete Script: “Ces-(annoyed grunt)-da”

Thank you, keep in mind though just because I've finished the script doesn't mean that I'm done. I'm perfectly willing to go back and change things. I've fixed the typos, but "hungy" was actually intentional as a call back to the hunger strike episode. Of course, I thought it seemed a little odd so ...
by Sun-Wukong
Sun Oct 10, 2010 2:51 am
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: Complete Script: “Ces-(annoyed grunt)-da”
Replies: 3
Views: 2362

Complete Script: “Ces-(annoyed grunt)-da”

Ces-(annoyed grunt)-da Rating - TV-PG (Mild Violence and Language) Plot Summary Drawn to a local police auction by an orangutan, Homer settles on a deep fryer instead. He get's a little more than he bargained for though. Meanwhile, Barney is pursued by Snake Jailbird, the original owner (well, kind...
by Sun-Wukong
Thu Oct 07, 2010 9:09 pm
Forum: Writing Help
Topic: Writing an episode, curious if it's any good.
Replies: 6
Views: 4057

Re: Writing an episode, curious if it's any good.

Huh, I guess I played so much Hit & Run I forgot about the Canyonero blowing up. Truth be told I just though it would make more sense as the vehicle to take if they were picking up an orangutan but I'll probably change it now.
by Sun-Wukong
Sun Sep 26, 2010 6:01 pm
Forum: Writing Help
Topic: Writing an episode, curious if it's any good.
Replies: 6
Views: 4057

Re: Writing an episode, curious if it's any good.

I was worried that it was too expository, but I thought I'd wait and see what others thought. Just so you know tough, Barney getting the orangutan is going to be the sub plot, but I'm taking it in a much different direction. By the way, here's some more material: ACT TWO [/u] INT. Canyonero - Dusk T...
by Sun-Wukong
Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:22 pm
Forum: Writing Help
Topic: Writing an episode, curious if it's any good.
Replies: 6
Views: 4057

Re: Writing an episode, curious if it's any good.

First of all, welcome aboard! We're always happy to get new scripts, and will hopefully be able to help you with anything you need. Thanks. A couple of typoes and other nitpicks: there are some unnecessary capitalisations (like "orangutan" and "sick"), that you'll probably catch if you read through...
by Sun-Wukong
Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:00 pm
Forum: Writing Help
Topic: Writing an episode, curious if it's any good.
Replies: 6
Views: 4057

Writing an episode, curious if it's any good.

As you can see I'm new here, I actually just found the site looking for info on how many pages should be in one act (which I still haven't found the answer to if anyone would like to tell me). So far I have six pages according to the script writing software I'm using, and I don't have any title in m...