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- Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:49 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: REVIEW: The End of Futurama?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7075
REVIEW: The End of Futurama?
THE END of FUTURAMA “Good news everyone!” “What is it this time Professor?” Amy asked. “Bender you have won a chance to experience the ultimate in retirement! This came in the mail addressed to the owner of Bender. So I opened it and this is a lovely surprise.” “Wait a sec!” Fry interjected. “They u...
- Wed Jun 12, 2013 11:47 pm
- Forum: Competitions
- Topic: [Competition] [Theme-a-day] The marvelous mysterious monster
- Replies: 4
- Views: 11401
Re: [Competition] [Theme-a-day] The marvelous mysterious mon
Kaspired I think I should've used this weapon in my latest story!!!!!!!!11 Great job!!!!!!!!!!!11
- Wed Jun 12, 2013 11:33 pm
- Forum: Writing Help
- Topic: A word about fanfiction.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 9662
Re: A word about fanfiction.
I think that i would love that guy, Archonix to read one of my stories. If I ever get an a fom someone then kind sir would you consider reading one of mine? I agree that taking a story plot/theme and twisting or altering it in a meaningful way is what this is all about. Especially sci-fi. Cause the ...
- Wed Jun 12, 2013 11:22 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: REVIEW: Amy's Revenge
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8052
Amy's Revenge
Can't figure out how to attach the story
- Wed Jun 12, 2013 11:15 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: REVIEW: Amy's Revenge
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8052
REVIEW: Amy's Revenge
This is a story that hopefully continues the PE crew’s adventures and showcases Bender by himself. The moral of the story is twofold. Be wary of strangers because often they meet you with their agenda in mind. And even if your wish becomes true, is it truly yours to keep? Also remember that when you...
- Wed Jun 12, 2013 10:50 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: Review: AGAIN, AGAIN, and AGAIN
- Replies: 3
- Views: 8262
Re: Review: AGAIN, AGAIN, and AGAIN
Thanks for the great review. i didn't even look at the grade if you gave it because Iwas so excited to receive such a thoughtful review. I do write in spurts so it doesn't surprise me that it seems like that upon reading. There is no better praise than the fact that you laughed out loud. That is som...
Re: Lump
Actually I think it looks like me. But officially i'm guessing a black male on the right as you gaze the picture and a female on the left. Shirley Chisolm and Miles Davis or Ray Charles? I did realize that it was an ad for a TV/internet provider, whose commercial I enjoy very much!
- Fri Mar 08, 2013 6:07 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: Review: AGAIN, AGAIN, and AGAIN
- Replies: 3
- Views: 8262
Re: Review: AGAIN, AGAIN, and AGAIN
You know I''ve lost my internet and so I do a lot of my time on this forum under Bob's time on the computer at work. Since I really don't like to submit things while at work I don't get to tell you guys what I think of your work. I must tell you that some of the art work on Leela and Amy has really ...
- Fri Mar 08, 2013 5:55 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: Review: AGAIN, AGAIN, and AGAIN
- Replies: 3
- Views: 8262
Review: AGAIN, AGAIN, and AGAIN
I wrote this because as Bob introduced me to these forums, three ideas came to me. This story is a bit longer than the two previous, maybe a bit easier read. I'm still in awe of everyone's talent level. And I still have a great sense of wonder that I even dare to post stories for the public. I can s...
- Fri Mar 08, 2013 5:38 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: Review: UPGRADE by Robert Stewart
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8228
Re: Review: UPGRADE by Robert Stewart
Thank you for that review. I believe that it is a very fair review. I'm going through a lot with my wife's breast cancer and disability through advanced diabetes. And I know I just didn't finish up the story.
- Sat Sep 15, 2012 8:31 pm
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: Review: UPGRADE by Robert Stewart
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8228
Review: UPGRADE by Robert Stewart
This is a continuation of the story of kidplay. Sorta like what would the Professor do next. You should see some of the ideas that Gulliver/Robert Fitzpatrick and I talk about. If you don't like it just blame Bob. Since we're both named Robert we do this at work all the time so neither of our feelin...
- Sat Sep 15, 2012 6:02 am
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: REVIEW: Steppin' Out (1/1) (Fry/Leela)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 9243
Re: REVIEW: Steppin' Out (1/1) (Fry/Leela)
Hello, I thought that if I was asking people to review my work that I should also do theirs. I agree with the review that was before me with the grade of A-. I also would like more meat to the story. Especially when it gives me a clue as to the author's insight. if you could've had Fry overcoming an...
- Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:42 am
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: Review: Kid play
- Replies: 6
- Views: 10199
Re: Review: Kid play
Hey thank you a lot for that info. :) i was tryin g to do a lot of dialogue and seeing if others could see the story without always introducing the characters. i also think I could and should include more description. i did think that I gave the aliens enough, but evidently it wasn't if the reader d...
- Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:41 am
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: Review: Kid play
- Replies: 6
- Views: 10199
Re: Review: Kid play
Hey thank you a lot for that info. :) i was tryin g to do a lot of dialogue and seeing if others could see the story without always introducing the characters. i also think I could and should include more description. i did think that I gave the aliens enough, but evidently it wasn't if the reader d...
- Thu Sep 13, 2012 5:20 am
- Forum: Completed Writing
- Topic: Review: Kid play
- Replies: 6
- Views: 10199
Re: Review: Kid play
Please don't kill me I'll find out how to attach stories before I post another one.