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by THIEFOFALWAYS
Wed Dec 28, 2011 9:34 pm
Forum: Got a problem?
Topic: Looking for 2 old stories
Replies: 3
Views: 7234

Re: Looking for 2 old stories

Wow. Much thanks Archonix. Thank you for finding these. :)
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:07 am
Forum: Got a problem?
Topic: Looking for 2 old stories
Replies: 3
Views: 7234

Looking for 2 old stories

Was wondering if it would be possible to locate two old Simpson fanfics. The first, of which, I'm certain was once on here (haven't been able to find it in the Drama section) is the "Destiny of a Homer" story (came in 2 parts) where Homer is losing his mind and Marge finds herself working ...
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Wed Aug 20, 2008 6:44 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Plot Bunny Shelter!
Replies: 57
Views: 53204

Re: Plot Bunny Shelter!

Another broad concept that popped into my head some time ago: Taking existing episodes with interesting stories that failed to live up to their potential and "fixing" them, which can mean anything from sticking to the basic plot and making general improvements, to reducing the story to a ...
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Wed May 14, 2008 1:46 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: Plot Bunny Shelter!
Replies: 57
Views: 53204

Re: Plot Bunny Shelter!

"Marge's Moment of Beauty": Comedy/drama. While out jogging, Marge manages to talk a suicidal man down from a roof. A news channel promises to interview her about her heroic action, but as the interview is run against a major sports event on another channel, it passes virtually unnoticed....
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:55 am
Forum: The Creative Pen
Topic: STORY: "Going Home"
Replies: 1
Views: 2173

STORY: "Going Home"

I've decided I'm going to try and submit a new story every week now. It will give me incentive to keep writing, and more importantly, finish the stories I begin. Here's another story, something I wrote shortly after 'Aftermath'. Please read it and tell me what you think.

Thanks.
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:55 pm
Forum: The Creative Pen
Topic: Thinking of submitting this to a literary magazine
Replies: 4
Views: 2811

Re: Thinking of submitting this to a literary magazine

Thanks to the both of you. I'll wait until you're done evaluating before I revise and submit it. And in response to one of your critiques... " 'From the new fault lines the plan was to give her face the opportunity to, like broken bones, mend themselves.' Putting of "from the new" etc...
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:29 pm
Forum: The Creative Pen
Topic: Thinking of submitting this to a literary magazine
Replies: 4
Views: 2811

Thinking of submitting this to a literary magazine

I had some members of my family read this, to see what they thought. All I could get out of them was that they found the story depressing. I'd liked to know what someone else thinks, aside from it being depressing, whether or not they consider it worth submitting or well written. Thanks ahead of tim...
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:23 pm
Forum: Got a problem?
Topic: Cannot log in at home
Replies: 6
Views: 9240

Re: Cannot log in at home

Thanks. Like your Stone Sour avatar by the way.
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:42 pm
Forum: Got a problem?
Topic: Cannot log in at home
Replies: 6
Views: 9240

Re: Cannot log in at home

I tried to create a new account under my current email and received the message that another user was using that same email. So the email under my account is up to date. Please send the password reset link to that email address.

And thank you.
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:18 pm
Forum: Got a problem?
Topic: Cannot log in at home
Replies: 6
Views: 9240

Cannot log in at home

I already have logged in at work (on Internet Explorer), but that was awhile ago and I can't remember my password to log in at home. I tried using the email password function but it never works. Today I tried to request my password on Safari at work and I got the message that 'The username THIEFOFAL...
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Tue Jul 10, 2007 6:45 pm
Forum: The Creative Pen
Topic: Dilemma - what to focus on
Replies: 5
Views: 2954

Re: Dilemma - what to focus on

You may have evolved a lot between these pieces, so you may have been a better writer with your first or your second novel. I think I could give a better answer if I saw an excerpt or maybe knew what the premise of each was. Don't let one rejection stop you though. Remember Stephen King had two of h...
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Thu Jul 05, 2007 5:01 pm
Forum: Writing Help
Topic: STORY IDEAS
Replies: 2
Views: 2133

Re: STORY IDEAS

The idea would be its the same (fake) FBI agent Selma had set up Marge with. She would've been the last person seen with him, and therefore the most likely suspect.
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Thu Jul 05, 2007 4:12 pm
Forum: Writing Help
Topic: STORY IDEAS
Replies: 2
Views: 2133

STORY IDEAS

I have two ideas here, they're both unusual genres for The Simpsons, fairly thriller-oriented..but here we go.. The first is a variation on the typical marriage-in-crisis episode we see twice or so a season now on The Simpsons, though combined with a thriller.. The Set-Up Four months ago Homer had a...
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Thu Jul 05, 2007 3:31 pm
Forum: Writing Help
Topic: Separate Lives, Separate Lies (Part 1)
Replies: 11
Views: 4876

Re: Separate Lives, Separate Lies (Part 1)

I had almost totally forgotten this. It must've been almost a year ago now that I wrote this. I wasn't exactly expecting anyone to pick apart the grammar on this thing. I was more hoping that the criticism would be more about the characters, foreshadowing and where the story is headed. Glad to see t...
by THIEFOFALWAYS
Wed Sep 13, 2006 5:59 pm
Forum: Writing Help
Topic: Separate Lives, Separate Lies (Part 1)
Replies: 11
Views: 4876

Re: Separate Lives, Separate Lies (Part 1)

This isn't the final draft, that's why I split up the work into two parts and am having it reviewed on Fanfic Opinions board. I'm going to use this feedback to rewrite it. In regards to the explaination there were many plot points to explain. Since I had to explain them again I can only blame myself...