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by Archonix
Sun Jan 06, 2002 10:43 am
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)
Replies: 27
Views: 6453

Re: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)

So have a shower?

For that, Gary Lineker is in the post as well. :naughty:

Hey, look on the bright side, at least we've got you re-reading your stuff now.  And it is good.

Now do the comedy!
by Archonix
Fri Jan 04, 2002 8:31 am
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)
Replies: 27
Views: 6453

Re: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)

That would be a good idea.

But, ignore Soren and do that comedy!  That's more fun.
by Archonix
Thu Jan 03, 2002 7:26 pm
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: Review - Giants
Replies: 8
Views: 2237

Re: Review - Giants

Stan would you mind posting this again so more people can read it?
by Archonix
Mon Dec 31, 2001 2:04 pm
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)
Replies: 27
Views: 6453

Re: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)

Not adult, just mature.  Unlike me. ;)
by Archonix
Mon Dec 31, 2001 9:00 am
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)
Replies: 27
Views: 6453

Re: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)

Jenny, I hope you don't mind, I've altered the title of the thread just a little bit. :)
by Archonix
Fri Dec 28, 2001 7:55 pm
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile (Mature)
Replies: 27
Views: 6453

Re: REVIEW - The Yellow Mile

Brilliant!  Just brilliant... what an ending.  I'd say more but I don't want to spoil it for everyone else.  Obviously comments about characterisation are out of the window since it's ahrd to define Maggie's character, but she seems alright. :) Of course, now you've done this I'm sure...
by Archonix
Wed Dec 12, 2001 12:59 pm
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEW: Child of Darkness
Replies: 36
Views: 8460

Re: REVIEW: Child of Darkness

PS, thanks Jenny for your review.  You can put the whip away now... :P

And thank you Marco too. :) *hands Marco a box of kleenex*
by Archonix
Tue Dec 11, 2001 7:30 pm
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: Review - Giants
Replies: 8
Views: 2237

Re: Review - Giants

Eh, I... can see the comedy, for sure, but I think you need to work on your writing style just a little.  I know it sounds mean, talking about the layout, but sometimes it makes a lot of difference. Same with stage directions.  You ahve them, and what you ahve is good, but they need to be ...
by Archonix
Mon Dec 10, 2001 9:59 am
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEW: Child of Darkness
Replies: 36
Views: 8460

REVIEW: Child of Darkness

Righty-ho, this is specifically for reviews now.  I think I've done everything I can do to it... and the other thread was starting to get a bit long.  I've made a slight change since then as well.
by Archonix
Sun Dec 09, 2001 9:39 am
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEWS- Homer the Director
Replies: 3
Views: 1672

Re: REVIEWS- Homer the Director

For some reason I got a dialogue asking for my "network identification" or similar.  I'll have to check on that... but pressing cancel gets past it anyway, so. Yeah... interestinge idea, a lot of good lines.  You're right that it has little story at the moment, but it does have potential i...
by Archonix
Wed Nov 14, 2001 3:46 pm
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: Review-
Replies: 4
Views: 1702

Re: Review-

I seem to have developed a short attention span recently, which is strange considering the length of my previous scripts... anyhoo, I haven't read all of this, but what I have read seems to be well done.  Quite good characterisation and a reasonable plot, which I'm sure make a good solid script...
by Archonix
Tue Nov 13, 2001 6:10 am
Forum: Completed Writing
Topic: REVIEW - Happy families
Replies: 10
Views: 1820

Re: REVIEW - Happy families

Now here's my go at it. :) Jenny, I'll have to be brutally frank; I've read it twice, and I don't like it.  I mean, this isn't a bad thing, since not everyone can like everything.  Your writing style is good, the tming is good, the characterisation is excellent, but I don't know if it woul...

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