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opinions wanted plz

Postby skajme » Thu Oct 02, 2003 10:30 pm

hey hey!!
i have decided to start work on a comic type thing based on the character below, im thinkin it is goin to be kinda like XXX, (but im not that sure yet) and i'd like to know what u think of my main character before i begin!!!

Oh and his name at the minute is jim, but if anyone has any suggestions then id be more than welcome to read them!!!!
thanks jamie.

edit: ive made some changes to the guy and id like to know which one u all prefer out of the three below
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Re:opinions wanted plz

Postby skajme » Sun Oct 05, 2003 2:43 pm

come on does no one ave anythin 2 say ???
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Re:opinions wanted plz

Postby Archonix » Sun Oct 05, 2003 3:09 pm

I think I quite like the first one. You have a nice simple stytle there that, coincidentally, won't get you in trouble with Fox. ;)

Ok, now for the nitpicks. You need to do a little work on your hands. That's it. Otherwise you have a very nice, strong style that lends itself well to a first-time internet comic.

By the way, I think the reason peole haven't said much is becuase this isn't strictly groening art, although youv'e got a groening style in there. ;) But as I said, I like the first one. You're better sticking with a totally original style than apeing someone elses, in the long run.
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Re:opinions wanted plz

Postby skajme » Tue Oct 07, 2003 8:23 pm

i dont think that i explained it very well ::) it aint gonna be an internet comic, it is actually a simpson style thing i am gonna do just as fan-art, thats why i did the different images of the main character. sorry bout that :)
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Re:opinions wanted plz

Postby JoeyGus » Mon Oct 20, 2003 10:45 pm

If you want to do it simpsons style, do the 3rd one, if you want it to be your own style, the first one.
And as he said, the hands need just a tiny bit work on them, other than it, it's good.

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