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lightning strikes!!
heres a sketch ive just finished, and once again i'd like any tips on improvements or anything that isn't right pointed out to me.....please . i dont know wheather to outline it in pen and scan it again, or to do the outline on photoshop like i usually do, so any suggestions on that would be cool too!!
thanks
thanks
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Re:lightning strikes!!
It's very good. I can't see much wrong with it at all, but as far as movement goes, perhaps the closest piece of Fry's jacket should be hanging forward a bit more. Also, if there's an explosion behind him, maybe the forks of his fringe should be blown forward a little bit too. That's about all really... it's really good
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Great sketch. Only nitpick is Fry's right hand's fingers. They look a little, well, stiff. If you know what I mean.
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Re:lightning strikes!!
right i have two pictures, both with different adjustments
so which is better??
you decide
so which is better??
you decide
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Re:lightning strikes!!
I think the top one is better. Also, I just spotted this now btw, that Fry's left foot is a tad big, considering it's supposed to be futher away than his right. Otherwise, good edit
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well heres the finished picture!
hope you like
hope you like
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Re:lightning strikes!!
That looks immensely cool, Skajme!
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Awesome! Just awesome, as always. I especially like the dust trail on that bit of rock debris passing Fry. Beautifully done, the quality of your finished products always seem to astound me. Especially your backgrounds, because I suck at them and yours are fantastic.
I'll put this up at TLZ soon for you too
I'll put this up at TLZ soon for you too
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Excellent! Beautiful work of art!
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Re:lightning strikes!!
Excellent. The pencil drawing looked a bit static, didn't give the idea of Fry jumping in the air more than him just kneeling.
But your coloring as always makes the pic two times better, and the details like the flying rock with dust give movement to it.
Really great, you could be doing Official Futurama fanart with no problems at all, i'd say.
But your coloring as always makes the pic two times better, and the details like the flying rock with dust give movement to it.
Really great, you could be doing Official Futurama fanart with no problems at all, i'd say.