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ive just done this sketch and i need a bit of help please. both his left arm and left leg look wrong to me, but i cant really work out how, with his left arm im not sure weather to have his hand behind his leg, or change it so its resting on his leg. if any one spots anything else that needs adjusting, itd be great if you could help me out.
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I'm not 100% sure, but I'd say the elbow is a bit too pointy, and I think the leg itself is okay, but the foot on the end of it is pointing in a weird direction. It's pointing down a bit much, and should be pointing a bit more towards the viewer.
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Re:drinkin in the alley
It looks to me like his elbow is too high up. It should be much closer to his leg.
The head may also be a little small, but I usualy make mistakes about head sizes so don't quote me on that.
The head may also be a little small, but I usualy make mistakes about head sizes so don't quote me on that.
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heres the first set of changes ive made based on what youve said
thanks guys!!!
thanks guys!!!
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Excellent! A definite improvement in all areas, and I can see no flaws at all now. I also like the extra scenery and objects you've added, they give the picture more life, especially the drain. And I know whatever I imagine the final product to be, I'll still be surprised and blown away by it. I look forward to its completion
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Re:drinkin in the alley
Looks great, can't wait for the colored version. Only nitpick I can find is his right hand. Doesn't look quite right to me, somehow...
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Wooo! Brilliant! Up on TLZ you go
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Brilliant indeed! Great atmosphere, and you know I like atmosphere.
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Re:drinkin in the alley
Very Good, but you need to work balance on the wall because I could see the left line is little higher than the right. But it still very good pic. So I give you four and the half smiles: .
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no offence DJ but i dont really have a clue what you mean!
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Re:drinkin in the alley
Wow! This looks really fine and pretty much clean.
But I think the trash bag has to be more rounder.
But I think the trash bag has to be more rounder.
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just thought id ask, did anyone notice what the alien graffiti says, i thought someone might have been curious??
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Well, I knew, but I didn't want to spoil it for people...
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