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is this a good pic

Post by DeathBunny » Wed Sep 29, 2004 2:15 am

is this a good pic i drew... yea i know, its not finsih, but how is it so far
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Re:is this a good pic

Post by DeathBunny » Thu Sep 30, 2004 1:37 am

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Re:is this a good pic

Post by Neodium » Thu Sep 30, 2004 3:06 am

I like it... but I'm no art critic, so you should wait for a more experienced artist. But before that, reduce the size of the image. It's annoyingly big, and most of it is blank space...
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Re:is this a good pic

Post by D.B. » Thu Sep 30, 2004 12:08 pm

The picture itself is okay, I guess. I've no idea what it's a picture of so it's pretty hard to comment. If you want constructive criticism then I'd suggest you redo the arms. Currently they're lacking any distinct joints. Face looks pretty much done, though the chin sticks out a bit at the bottom.
It's annoyingly big, and most of it is blank space...
That pretty much covers it. I tried to look at it before, but gave up due to the inordinate length of time it takes to load (and the fact only white space seemed to be appearing). You'll get more replies if you either wait until you've finished before posting, or just crop the bits you want comments about into smaller images for posting.
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Re:is this a good pic

Post by DeathBunny » Fri Oct 01, 2004 1:08 am

It a guy turn ing to a werewolf... its David naughton, from "AN AMERICAN WEREWOLF IN LONDON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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Re:is this a good pic

Post by Meteorite » Fri Oct 01, 2004 1:43 am

DeathBunny wrote: It a guy turn ing to a werewolf... its David naughton, from "AN AMERICAN WEREWOLF IN LONDON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Ah, figured it was some werewolf thing. Not bad, what's there.


But yeah look, a lot of people (including me) get turned off by large pictures, especially when most of it is just empty white space. You don't need to scan and post your entire notebook, just what you want judged.

I've taken the liberty of cropping and resizing(just to 75%, nothing too drastic) your picture so it can be seen without having to scroll back and forth, and a lot easier to judge.

Please do the same with future pictures you may post.
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