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"Do you ever think anything you don't say?"

Post by gkscotty » Sun Oct 17, 2004 7:20 pm

A little anime-style pic here. If anyone can tell me whats up with Bart's lower body I'd like to hear it, plus any other crits and comments...

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Re:"Do you ever think anything you don't say?"

Post by Horrorhead » Sun Oct 17, 2004 9:27 pm

Aw, This looks sweet, I like it :)
The heads could be a bit smaller tough.
And I'm not sure if Bart would have the courage to touch her there. :D
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Re:"Do you ever think anything you don't say?"

Post by Kif White » Sun Oct 17, 2004 9:51 pm

Very nice! (Yes, I'm saying that about a Jessica pic...) And I actually think the head sizes are perfect for the style myself. Lower-half body issues? Can't really spot any except that the leg and foot tucked behind are a tad off. The foot should be further back (or to the left (our left)), else Bart has one leg longer than the other. Otherwise, great stuff. Oh, and Bart's arm would also have to be fairly long to reach over to Jessica's far hip like that, though that can likely be fixed too.
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Re:"Do you ever think anything you don't say?"

Post by Sheana_Molloy » Mon Oct 18, 2004 12:49 am

Very, very scary. But interesting. :) You're getting better...
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Re:"Do you ever think anything you don't say?"

Post by Hera_Potter » Wed Oct 27, 2004 5:09 pm

Looks pretty good! The expressions are great and very in character. I also like the detail in Jessica's hair.

Nitpicks: The right half of Bart's face (cheek and below) seems to bulge out a bit, and the curb (can't think if that's the word or not) at the bottom looks a little strange on the far right.
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Re:"Do you ever think anything you don't say?"

Post by JoeyGus » Wed Oct 27, 2004 5:46 pm

nice pic, but the cheek is a bit bulging on bart's face and it does not look like an anime styled pic that much.
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Re:"Do you ever think anything you don't say?"

Post by c_nordlander » Wed Oct 27, 2004 7:14 pm

Oh, I completely forgot to review this.

Very nice picture, on a level with your more recent Simpmoon Allison and Jessica one. Nice character designs, particularly Bart, and Jessica's expression is nifty. JoeyGus may have a point about Bart's cheekbone, though.

In short, very good.
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