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In Progress - I have no idea what I'm doing

Post by gkscotty » Sun May 08, 2005 12:51 am

So here's an anime-style pic. I have no idea what to do with the hands. (crits about other stuff welcome too) Gonna leave it for now and see what I'll do tomorrow. Suggestions very welcome.

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Post by OARRIAGA2001 » Sun May 08, 2005 7:43 am

Looks nice, I guess its jessica lovejoy, the right hand is ok; just work a little bit on her left hand. :doh:
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Post by Tony_Baritone » Sun May 08, 2005 3:06 pm

It clearly refs the end of "Bart's Girlfriend", but I just wanted to say that while it was loading, I was sure that the ripples in the water bucket would be Bart's hair. :)
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Post by djwhitaker2004 » Sat Aug 27, 2005 5:05 am

It good but I'm agree with Alex, you need to try your best working her arms. And I didn't like the trash can, it look like the child draw that. But it still good.
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Post by Sheana_Molloy » Sat Aug 27, 2005 7:33 am

Just a tip:  digging up a four-month old thread and saying things like a child drew it will not endear you to people or come off as good critiquing.
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Post by Dagdamor » Sat Aug 27, 2005 7:43 am

Aw, come on Sheana, D.J. tries his best. At least, we don't have smiley or rating system anymore. :D
Also I wouldn't be mad if someone will bump one of my threads up ;) no matter how old is it.
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Post by Jon » Sat Aug 27, 2005 8:09 am

Even so, it would most likely be upsetting to a lot of other people.
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Post by Tigersrock144 » Sat Aug 27, 2005 11:28 am

I don't think a child drew it, it's better than my manga/anime style, proberbly 'cos I'm new to it ^^ heh heh
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Post by Ekko » Sun Aug 28, 2005 5:54 am

Jon wrote: Even so, it would most likely be upsetting to a lot of other people.
Yeah, I know it'd sure ruin my entire day if an old topic on a board that rarely gets new posts got bumped up. I mean, what's the point of existence when the past never leaves you?

I'll side with Dagdamor. Mr. D.J. is putting some effort into rating now and is still getting shot down, and that's not cool.
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Post by Jon » Sun Aug 28, 2005 8:12 pm

Ouch!!
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Post by Sheana_Molloy » Sun Aug 28, 2005 11:36 pm

I'm not trying to be mean.  I'm just pointing out that if he wants to improve relations and things at this site, the way he's going about it is not helping.  I'm trying to help.
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Post by Dagdamor » Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:44 am

Ouch, indeed. I forgot to say something about Steve's picture! Image
Well, it looks a bit unusual for me as always. But not bad at all, for Simpsons/Anime combination Steve caught Jessica's expression very well. I cannot say I loved this pic (hey, where's Lisa? *is kicked* :)), but it looks good. Of course it's an old picture and you already improved your style a lot since then. Keep it up, Steve! You put much more efforts in your pics than me, and this shows.
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