Check my wheels...
Check my wheels...
Here's a coloring of my brother's TOTALY modifeid New Beetle.
He drew it, I colored it. Was the team work worth while?
He drew it, I colored it. Was the team work worth while?
Re: Check my wheels...
I'd say it was more than worth the while.
Your coloring is top notch, very well placed shading, nice effect on the glass. Although to make it look "cooler", i'd have it LOTS OF HIGHLIGHTS, very bright, almost white, especially on the side. Makes it shiny.
As for the drawing, i don't know if your prother accepts criticism, but it''s something i have noticed in one of your earlier drawings too. The idea beneath the car is good, but i think he draws them way too tall. Although, it may be a perspective problem. If i cover up the weels, it makes more sense because the car looks like it's turned a bit towards us. But with the wheels being drawn as ellipses and looking "flat", it gives a contrasting image, making it looks like the car is actually "squeezed" horizontally and too tall.
So i'd suggest him to give a better size and perspective to the wheels... and again about the wheels, they should go a bit lower than that. The poor car willl be glued to the ground at the first acceleration like that, since there is no space it and the road. And it gives you space to place underside neons!
Finally, it definitely looks cool, but if he worked on these two aspects, i think he'd like it better too.
P.S.: Actually, perspective or not, the car IS too tall imho.
Your coloring is top notch, very well placed shading, nice effect on the glass. Although to make it look "cooler", i'd have it LOTS OF HIGHLIGHTS, very bright, almost white, especially on the side. Makes it shiny.
As for the drawing, i don't know if your prother accepts criticism, but it''s something i have noticed in one of your earlier drawings too. The idea beneath the car is good, but i think he draws them way too tall. Although, it may be a perspective problem. If i cover up the weels, it makes more sense because the car looks like it's turned a bit towards us. But with the wheels being drawn as ellipses and looking "flat", it gives a contrasting image, making it looks like the car is actually "squeezed" horizontally and too tall.
So i'd suggest him to give a better size and perspective to the wheels... and again about the wheels, they should go a bit lower than that. The poor car willl be glued to the ground at the first acceleration like that, since there is no space it and the road. And it gives you space to place underside neons!
Finally, it definitely looks cool, but if he worked on these two aspects, i think he'd like it better too.
P.S.: Actually, perspective or not, the car IS too tall imho.
Last edited by Marco on Fri Aug 05, 2005 8:23 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Check my wheels...
Thanks dude! It's supposed to be a 'cartoon car', I dont know whether you've ever seen them before. They always have flat lines for floor and huge wheels. Here's a link http://www.cartooncars.com/frameset.htm
As for the coloring, duely noted, more shine less grime.
Thanks a lot!
As for the coloring, duely noted, more shine less grime.
Thanks a lot!
-
- Senior Technical Supervisor
- Posts: 829
- Joined: Fri Dec 05, 2003 12:38 am
Re: Check my wheels...
Well you didn't do great because the tires look too thin and I didn't like the rear view mirror, I give it 2.5 out of 5.
Last edited by Anonymous on Fri Sep 16, 2005 12:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
If Simpsons release only in August & December, here the list in the future:
Season 10 will be out on Aug 07, season 11 on Dec 07, season 12 on Aug 08, season 13 on Dec 08, season 14 on Aug 09, season 15 on Dec 09, season 16 on Aug 10, season 17 on Dec 10, & season 18 on Aug 11.
Season 10 will be out on Aug 07, season 11 on Dec 07, season 12 on Aug 08, season 13 on Dec 08, season 14 on Aug 09, season 15 on Dec 09, season 16 on Aug 10, season 17 on Dec 10, & season 18 on Aug 11.
- Tigersrock144
- Senior Technical Supervisor
- Posts: 888
- Joined: Wed Aug 18, 2004 8:35 pm
- Location: England,Hertfordshire
- Contact:
Re: Check my wheels...
dosn't look great? why and how?....
anyway I like it
It looks funky ^_^
I played on my m8s new playstation 2 yesterday and she had the game underground, reminds me of one of the cars she created
keep it up
anyway I like it
It looks funky ^_^
I played on my m8s new playstation 2 yesterday and she had the game underground, reminds me of one of the cars she created
keep it up
If you wish to add me on your msn contact list, Please notify me first by sending me a note or something
Thank you
Thank you