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Lisa manga

Post by Ekko » Thu Dec 01, 2005 2:44 am

I just want an opinion..
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Re: Lisa manga

Post by Terry Y » Thu Dec 01, 2005 5:36 am

In my opinion, not bad!  The eyes are a little big for my taste, but it *is* anime.  Good work!
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Re: Lisa manga

Post by D.B. » Thu Dec 01, 2005 9:53 pm

Hmm - part of the difficulty here is that spiky hair is so common in manga, which makes it hard to make the hair distinctly Lisa's unless you stick pretty close to the original. That said it certainly doesn't look unlike Lisa (the pearls help), and the lineart's good with some nice details (the eyes are lovely).
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Re: Lisa manga

Post by Ekko » Thu Dec 01, 2005 11:12 pm

It wasn't that I was trying to make it Lisa; I just wanted an opinion on the manga style face. (You see, I've been practising) Since this is more or less a Simpsons related site, I decided to make it vaguely familiar.
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Re: Lisa manga

Post by D.B. » Thu Dec 01, 2005 11:43 pm

ahh, right. I'm sure you can see why I got confused, given the title of the topic though :)

Well, from a general manga point of view then, it's looking good to me. You've clearly been practising. All I can really nitpick (as I've never drawn manag myself) is that maybe her hair at the back is a little too 'thin' and close to the sphere of her head. It looks almost squashed down, like she's been lying on a pillow, compared to the rest of her.
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Re: Lisa manga

Post by Archonix » Thu Dec 01, 2005 11:52 pm

I have to say, the eyes are really good. Amazing, perhaps. :)
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Re: Lisa manga

Post by djwhitaker2004 » Sat Dec 17, 2005 5:06 am

Good pic, Martino. But I didn't like the pearls, it was little too big.
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