A short horror story. A demon gives a human a chance to see Hell, but there's a bit of a twist. (Rather dark, but there's a point to it other than just gruesomeness.)
All constructive criticism is, as usual, greatly appreciated.
Note: the .doc and .odt documents are completely identical. The different filenames are just a fluke.
STORY: Katabasis
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STORY: Katabasis
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Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
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Re: STORY: Katabasis
I can vouch for the fact that horror writing is fun...nicely done.
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Re: STORY: Katabasis
Gorgeously dark, Chris! As always, I can't find a single thing wrong with it - it's perfect and gave me goosebumps.
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Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"