Poem: I went to her locker, but it was closed...

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Poem: I went to her locker, but it was closed...

Post by Ekko » Mon Apr 11, 2005 9:51 pm

To be honest, I hate poems. Writing them is even worse, it just isn't my niche. But the events of today kinda' ticked me off, and felt I had to express my 'feelings' somehow. The poem itself was supposed to be a song, but it just didn't jive, so I called it a poem instead. Read it if you must, comment at your will...
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Re: Poem: I went to her locker, but it was closed...

Post by Dagdamor » Sat Apr 16, 2005 10:27 am

It's not bad. I'm awful at valueing poems, but this one sounds okay.
There are some complaints about rhyme, also maybe it's not very lowly to write poems involving yourself... ;) but what the heck, it's good, especially for the first try. Nice work!
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Re: Poem: I went to her locker, but it was closed...

Post by kevo111 » Fri Apr 22, 2005 3:27 am

:)Not bad I really like poems. Im especialy good at Haiku and Limerick poetry
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