Poem: I went to her locker, but it was closed...
Poem: I went to her locker, but it was closed...
To be honest, I hate poems. Writing them is even worse, it just isn't my niche. But the events of today kinda' ticked me off, and felt I had to express my 'feelings' somehow. The poem itself was supposed to be a song, but it just didn't jive, so I called it a poem instead. Read it if you must, comment at your will...
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Re: Poem: I went to her locker, but it was closed...
It's not bad. I'm awful at valueing poems, but this one sounds okay.
There are some complaints about rhyme, also maybe it's not very lowly to write poems involving yourself... but what the heck, it's good, especially for the first try. Nice work!
There are some complaints about rhyme, also maybe it's not very lowly to write poems involving yourself... but what the heck, it's good, especially for the first try. Nice work!
Re: Poem: I went to her locker, but it was closed...
:)Not bad I really like poems. Im especialy good at Haiku and Limerick poetry
Kevin To