STORY: Virgin Vessels

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STORY: Virgin Vessels

Postby c_nordlander » Tue Aug 30, 2011 10:48 pm

Nope, it's not hentai.

Science fiction/horror. Ebba is abducted from the schoolyard with three other teenage girls from her class and finds herself in a strange cell. Then Ebba is taken away by something horrific, and the others make a desperate attempt to escape. And what is the purpose their captors have in mind?

Again, no sex, in case the title gave you pause. It is rather more physically disgusting than most of my stories, though. Nothing that should make you lose your lunch, but it's the fleshier variety of horror.

As usual, drop me a line and I'll email the story (ca 8 pages long) to you. If you provide helpful con-crit I'll kill in your honour.
The noose draws tighter;
This is the end;
I'm a good fighter
But a bad friend;
I've played the traitor
Over and over;
I'm a good hater
But a bad lover.


Elinor Wylie, "Peregrine"
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Re: STORY: Virgin Vessels

Postby missy_misery » Mon Sep 12, 2011 12:40 am

You won't quite have to kill in my honor, because, as always, I can never find anything useful to crit you over! This is incredibly gripping and moving and gave me a chill in the best of ways.
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