STORY: To the Blue Line

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STORY: To the Blue Line

Postby c_nordlander » Thu Aug 09, 2012 10:34 am

A very short story (just over one page) about childhood rivalry. Linnea finally gets a chance to see whether she's better than her friend Elsie in a PE class race.

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The noose draws tighter;
This is the end;
I'm a good fighter
But a bad friend;
I've played the traitor
Over and over;
I'm a good hater
But a bad lover.


Elinor Wylie, "Peregrine"
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Re: STORY: To the Blue Line

Postby missy_misery » Wed Aug 15, 2012 11:34 pm

I think I told you before how powerful this story is, and I'll say it again - masterful, touching, glorious.

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Bravo!
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