A very short story (just over one page) about childhood rivalry. Linnea finally gets a chance to see whether she's better than her friend Elsie in a PE class race.
As usual, drop me a line and I'll e-mail it to you. All constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
STORY: To the Blue Line
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c_nordlander
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STORY: To the Blue Line
Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
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missy_misery
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Re: STORY: To the Blue Line
I think I told you before how powerful this story is, and I'll say it again - masterful, touching, glorious.
Bravo!
Bravo!
Now known as Lisabella! (Or Missy. Missy's good.)
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Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"
Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"