- Insane Underling
- Posts: 11489
- Joined: Fri Aug 10, 2001 2:00 pm
- Custom Title: Running after something that I'll never kill
- Location: Redacted, Redacticaster
Contact me (by PM, email, in this thread, whatever takes your fancy) if you want me to send it to you. It is just over 4 pages. No gore or other objectionable content, but lots of mind-control-related creepiness, in case that's a dealbreaker.
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated: I particularly want to know if the bit from Tova's perspective is too long or not. Or, you know, anything else that might need fixing.
This is the end;
I'm a good fighter
But a bad friend;
I've played the traitor
Over and over;
I'm a good hater
But a bad lover.
Elinor Wylie, "Peregrine"
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