STORY: The Human-Mum
- c_nordlander
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STORY: The Human-Mum
Another short story, this one more low-key than most of mine. Slightly unusual. A young cat is searching for the human who's almost been a mother to her.
Very short (about one page). Any constructive criticism, no matter how big or small, will be vastly appreciated.
Contact me if you want to read it, and I'll email it to you.
Very short (about one page). Any constructive criticism, no matter how big or small, will be vastly appreciated.
Contact me if you want to read it, and I'll email it to you.
Last edited by c_nordlander on Tue May 28, 2013 11:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
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Re: STORY: The Human-Mum
This is quite cute...makes me think of Belle loping around the house. I shall have to make sure my daughter reads this. I've often wondered what a cat would say if it could speak to us in our language. In Gordon R. Dickson's "The Magnificent Wilf," the family great dane is given the power of telepathic communication, which is really funny.
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Re: STORY: The Human-Mum
Oh what a story. I like the sense of loss from And finally vowing not to quit until the mother is found, oh how determinately futile...
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Re: STORY: The Human-Mum
Aww, this was sweet Chris! It felt sweet, and very true to cat-kind in the narrative.
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