I'm putting my story here cos FanFiction Net took it down, even though I got someone to beta it like people told me to!
Anyways, heres my story, hope y'all enjoy!
opps, forgot to put it up! ^o^;
review my story!
review my story!
Hello peoples! my names Cheryl but you can call me cher! I like Simpsons, anime` (how do ya get that funny looking e with the line on top?) and lotsa stuff!
I'm putting my story here cos FanFiction Net took it down, even though I got someone to beta it like people told me to!
Anyways, heres my story, hope y'all enjoy!
opps, forgot to put it up! ^o^;
I'm putting my story here cos FanFiction Net took it down, even though I got someone to beta it like people told me to!
Anyways, heres my story, hope y'all enjoy!
opps, forgot to put it up! ^o^;
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c_nordlander
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Re: review my story!
I do not normally read fan-fiction, as I find it an offence against copyright. Taking the intellectual property of a person and abusing it for licentious stories about prostitutes, established characters having homosexual relationships with each other, and -this is an actual example- stealing the identity of their long lost twins and then running for the highest office of state, seems to me to be the most flagrant case of what I would like to refer to as literary misappropriation.
This does not, howsoever, apply to your script, whose appeal I find wholly deconstructivist, even Ionescan(1) in its use of language and convention as concretist units added to the Aristotelian ones of plot and character. The intertextual allusions to pop culture such as Sailor Moon, Star Wars and Un chien andalou strike the tone for the narrator/signifier's Promethean struggle against his literary ancestry.(3)
I would enclose a more detailed review, but I have decided to save this for in the case I am allowed to write my thesis on your work. If you agree to this, please contact me by my Sorbonne academic webmail.
(1) E.g. La cantatrice chauve
(2) Poetics 4.2
(3) Harold Bloom, Anxiety of Influence
This does not, howsoever, apply to your script, whose appeal I find wholly deconstructivist, even Ionescan(1) in its use of language and convention as concretist units added to the Aristotelian ones of plot and character. The intertextual allusions to pop culture such as Sailor Moon, Star Wars and Un chien andalou strike the tone for the narrator/signifier's Promethean struggle against his literary ancestry.(3)
I would enclose a more detailed review, but I have decided to save this for in the case I am allowed to write my thesis on your work. If you agree to this, please contact me by my Sorbonne academic webmail.
(1) E.g. La cantatrice chauve
(2) Poetics 4.2
(3) Harold Bloom, Anxiety of Influence
Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Re: review my story!
Uhhhh I didnt understand youre post 
you dont read fanfiction but you read mine? does that mean you like it? 
you dont read fanfiction but you read mine? does that mean you like it? -
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Re: review my story!
Done!
Wait a..
*banned*
Wait a..
*banned*
<gkscotty|drawing> most people play Pokemon games with GameFAQs or a Pokéwiki open
<gkscotty|drawing> you seem to have TVTRopes
Sometimes I feel like dressing up my Gaia avatar.
Feels kinda pointless since I don't actually do stuff at Gaia, so I'm putting it here.
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Re: review my story!
Well... I dont mean any offence but, when I read it first I laughed under my breath...
(And wow... is this my second post in the fan-fic area?)
(EDIT: and 2nd wow... 400th post)
(And wow... is this my second post in the fan-fic area?)
(EDIT: and 2nd wow... 400th post)
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Re: review my story!
Why would I be offended? It was meant to be bad. 
<gkscotty|drawing> most people play Pokemon games with GameFAQs or a Pokéwiki open
<gkscotty|drawing> you seem to have TVTRopes
Sometimes I feel like dressing up my Gaia avatar.
Feels kinda pointless since I don't actually do stuff at Gaia, so I'm putting it here.