Well, here are a few things I have to say back to you.
"A typo that I know I have pointed out before: a muscular body is "rippled", not "ripped".
As for this. If you are a true American(which I know you are not
) Ripped is how it is said. remember that we americans are notorious for our use of bad slang. thank you for pointing out more tense and grammar errors, if only i really went through it more than once every 4 months.
""verbally talk to them" is redundant."
This is one of those things that I am not going to change. a small part of Zeke's Character is his unknown stupidity. He is supposed to seem smart and he is in his own right, but some of the things that he says will be brought back around and will be explained, but this one is just an inside joke that my friends and i accidentally came up with.
I hope to give something more reputable in the near future.
