return of sideshow bob

[Dracula]

Please move if in the wrong place

chapter one

We open on srpingfield prison  where we see wigium , snake , ms bozt and sideshow bob

Wigium - Okay you thugs it's time for the prisonal musical , it time to rehasre your roles

Bob - What did I do to desvere this a fate worse then hades himself

Ms Bozt - Well was it because you famed krusty the clown , tried to rigged an election ., holded springfield to ransom with a nuclear bomb  tried to blow up a dam , tried to kill krusty and try to kill the members of the simpson family who put you here mainly bart and lisa

Bob quite crossly -  how many times do I have to tell you that my brother was the one who tried to blow up the dam.

Ms Bozt - Whatever you the are crimnal master mind behind this 

Bob - Any way by this time time tonight I shall escape and then have my revenge on those simpsons children manily bart who is my enemy and lisa to whom my iniffer

Wigim - Hey no talking between prisioners during the work day

Bob - Since when

Wigum - Since just five minties agi

Bob - Since that illgel I thought we lived in a free country where we could say what we wanted

Wigim - You should have thought of that before you became a crimal where all rights are taken way.  Now which roel do you want

Bob - What the muscial

Wigim - I belive this year its a christmas carol

Bob - I be srouge then but by tonight the game will ne  on

Wigim - Yeah the big game is on tonight

Bob - I wasn't talking about the super bowl

Wigim -  I shut up now

after a long day bob is place back in his cell

Bob  must be a way to esacpe from his cell

bob looked around he saw a fire alarm

Bob eyes glemed  luck for him the fire alarm was ny him taking the skelon key of his cell he had made in sharpclass , he fiddled with the lock until he manged to get out

bob then pulled the alaram then sliped back into his cell 

Lou and Eddie - Cheif the fire alaram is going

Cheif - all right get all men on double to get out the prisoners

Lou and Eddie - We are the force cheif

Cheif - How could I have forget to recuit more people escially after that last riot any way escort the prisnoers out

Lou and Eddie - Oksy

Next scene - the outside of the prison

Bob slips away while the fire engine cheif is talking to wigimu

Fire cheif- it was a flase alarm 

Wigim - - Aw man this is what we get by putting alarms by the cells of prisonsers ,  all right you prionsers back to your cells

Snake - Like no way man

Wigim - Okay what if I let you and your prinsers go but on the condition you never commut any crimes ever again

Snake - No Way

Wigim - I take that as a yes by the way where is sideshow

Man who eats people's faces - He took off cheif

Wigim - Oh man if anybody askes I just killed him okay and cheif wigim walks off

Well I hoped you enjoyed the proglue to sideshow's bob return , bart and lisa and bob wlll be the foucs of the next couple of chapeters

[Focusyn]

I cannot count how many times you misspelled "Wiggum".

Are you typing with your elbows, or what?

You seem to know some things about the Simpsons history which is evident in your jokes. However, these are the *exact* same jokes done in their respective episodes. Try to think of something new.

I suggest typing your story in a word processor, using spellcheck, and attaching it here instead of mashing all in the body of your post.

And by god, for coherency's sake, learn how spell words and names. *shudder*. It's hard for us to give our opinions when we can't understand the words in your story.

[zekeprower]

Oh My God. Dracula, i you have done something that i have never seen done before. you have commited Litterary Homicide. pleas do as Focusyn said and use a word processor, preferably something that has a spell checker.

once you do that i think that your stories will start to get better.

[Lady_Simpson]

Spellcheck would certainly be good.
Keep writing though, this certainly seems like a story with promise.

[archonix]

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