(WIP) (Waving) (A Shirt Tone Guy/Missy Collaboration) "Exit 158" (PG)

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Re: (WIP) (Waving) (A Shirt Tone Guy/Missy Collaboration)

Post by c_nordlander » Sun Aug 01, 2010 11:20 am

Right at the start of the scene where they go up to the hill to see Milhouse. Also, looking at it, I noticed another typo there: "Millhouse".
The noose draws tighter;
This is the end;
I'm a good fighter
But a bad friend;
I've played the traitor
Over and over;
I'm a good hater
But a bad lover.


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Re: (WIP) (Waving) (A Shirt Tone Guy/Missy Collaboration)

Post by missy_misery » Wed Aug 04, 2010 7:58 pm

Thank you, Chris :) .
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