(WIP) (Waving) (A Shirt Tone Guy/Missy Collaboration) "Exit 158" (PG)

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Re: (WIP) (Waving) (A Shirt Tone Guy/Missy Collaboration)

Post by c_nordlander » Sun Aug 01, 2010 11:20 am

Right at the start of the scene where they go up to the hill to see Milhouse. Also, looking at it, I noticed another typo there: "Millhouse".
Are you really gonna take it like that?
Riding on the missile with a cowboy hat?

Oh, well the world is gonna end
So dance around the fire that we once believed in
Oh, wanna tear it down again, now
'Cause there's nothing left for us to bleed
Give it up, the sons of anarchy
So come around and have another round on me!

DANCE, F***ER, DANCE, LET THE MOTHERF***ER BURN!


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Re: (WIP) (Waving) (A Shirt Tone Guy/Missy Collaboration)

Post by missy_misery » Wed Aug 04, 2010 7:58 pm

Thank you, Chris :) .
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