Kenneth steps up to the challenge.

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Kenneth steps up to the challenge.

Post by Kif White » Thu Nov 01, 2007 2:29 pm

I think I'll enter this competition too for once. It interests me for sure. Not sure about ideas yet, I'll get back once I've mulled over the options some more.  :)
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Re: Kenneth steps up to the challenge.

Post by Kif White » Thu Nov 15, 2007 12:03 pm

First Draft is up. Remember, this is not final, I might make some adjustments to it later. Hope anybody who chooses to read it enjoys it.  :)
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Re: Kenneth steps up to the challenge.

Post by missy_misery » Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:18 pm

Touching, thought-provoking and VERY sci-fi - very Kif.  Good stuff, man - I couldn't see many flaws worth changing.
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Re: Kenneth steps up to the challenge.

Post by Kif White » Sun Dec 02, 2007 2:13 pm

Okay, final version is ready now. Enjoy!  :)
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Re: Kenneth steps up to the challenge.

Post by c_nordlander » Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:42 pm

Typoes: "Fry is not only being send"; and "his rather said" EDIT: Fixed now.

Excellent (and scary) plot, clever title, and just generally very good use of the characters and the story elements. I was especially happy to see
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again. Good job!  :fry
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