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- c_nordlander
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This Is CHRISTINAAAAAAAAAAA!
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Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
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Stolen Borrowed from the MST3K boards.
"I love cooking with wine. Sometimes I even put it in the food." - Julia Child
- c_nordlander
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The first draft of my entry, "The Garden of Forking Pasts", is finished now. A finalised version will be posted soon.
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Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
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Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
- c_nordlander
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And here it is, in all its finalised glory, "The Garden of Forking Pasts", weighing in at 2993 words (excluding disclaimers and other extraneous material).
Beginning: Fry suffers from a mysterious disease
Middle: Someone gets... AMNESIA!
End: Fry decides to return to the way things were
A bit more depressing than I originally planned. Warning: alternate universe character death.
Beginning: Fry suffers from a mysterious disease
Middle: Someone gets... AMNESIA!
End: Fry decides to return to the way things were
A bit more depressing than I originally planned. Warning: alternate universe character death.
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Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
- missy_misery
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This is really, really beautiful, Chris - you nail down the emotional cores of characters so well. Another wonderful combination of emotions on display here - the darkness is properly leavened with humor. Excellent stuff.
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Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"
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Extremely impressive. As usual, your writing and characterisation shines here, particuarly your descriptions and Fry's emotions. But I have to give extra special kudos to...
Overall, a fantastic read. I can see why you took the top award
Overall, a fantastic read. I can see why you took the top award
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"Know the conflict within before facing the conflict without."
Now Watching: Babylon 5 - Season 3
Now Playing: Dragon Age Origins: Awakening, Pokemon Heart Gold
Now Reading: Catch 22
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Excellent stuff. No wonder you won! A great little story that I'd personally like to see fleshed out into something longer. Kudos!
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