I'll give it a shot

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Re: I'll give it a shot

Post by c_nordlander » Sun Dec 21, 2008 3:37 pm

I'm sick of shippy Fry/Leela stories, too, and I'm glad you didn't take that route, nor the Grand Guignol one (well, you had everyone turning into zombies instead...  :D ). And if you were going for humour, you succeeded.

And writing the same story as everyone else isn't a good way to stand out in a competition...
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Re: I'll give it a shot

Post by Red_Line » Sun Dec 21, 2008 5:30 pm

I liked it.  As I commented over on Madhouse, I think this one could stand as an episode.
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