REVIEWS- Homer the Director
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REVIEWS- Homer the Director
Ok, here's my second script I made. It's not show length and there's little story, but I think it's pretty funny. In the script, Homer starts making a documentary about himself while Bart tries to get money so he can buy an A-Team plate signed by a Mr.T lookalike.
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For some reason I got a dialogue asking for my "network identification" or similar. I'll have to check on that... but pressing cancel gets past it anyway, so.
Yeah... interestinge idea, a lot of good lines. You're right that it has little story at the moment, but it does have potential if you're willing to work on it.
Yeah... interestinge idea, a lot of good lines. You're right that it has little story at the moment, but it does have potential if you're willing to work on it.
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True, the story felt vague, but I loved some jokes, such as the rap routine, and the completely pointless documentary about the Baron. With some brushing-up, this could make a regular episode.
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Sitting with a harpoon
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I agree with Graham and Chris. I found this fic really funny and full of good jokes, maybe making the plot a bit more interesting could do this an "A" episode
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