Going Undercover

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Going Undercover

Post by gkscotty » Mon Jul 05, 2004 11:47 pm

Well, this was just a quick sketch I decided to colour. I'm not happy with it, body doesn't seem right to me, but what the hey.
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Re:Going Undercover

Post by Kif White » Tue Jul 06, 2004 12:00 am

*LOL* Very funn! :D

Criticisms, her nearest eye I think needs to be a bit rounder at the sides, and her body is a bit tall (unless you're going for an older Lisa?). Other than that, it's pretty good. Love her expression :)
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Re:Going Undercover

Post by Kwyjibo » Tue Jul 06, 2004 12:06 am

Hahaha! :D

My nitpicks: Her hand should be a bit larger, and the "suction cups" larger but a little less protruding

Also, one eye should be larger than the other. :)
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Re:Going Undercover

Post by Janie » Tue Jul 06, 2004 5:08 am

I like it!

I agree, tho, that her body looks too tall and stretched-out, and one of her eyes should be rounded more... but the idea of this pic is great...for some reason I'm cracking up at that 'undercover' thing, hahaha!

Good work!
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Re:Going Undercover

Post by c_nordlander » Tue Jul 06, 2004 10:30 am

That is one good-looking tentacle! ;D

Well, what can I say? You know I love it. I don't have a problem with her body length, it's a style thing. Everyone's pretty much pointed out the problems already.

I like how you've given her a distinctly Laverne-like expression, too.
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Re:Going Undercover

Post by SirMustapha » Tue Jul 06, 2004 12:18 pm

Now, only Steve could have come with an idea like this. ;D!

Loved it, btw - nitpicks aside. I'm not good at nitpicking, especially when everyone did it already.
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Re:Going Undercover

Post by djwhitaker2004 » Wed Jul 14, 2004 12:43 pm

Good pic, and yes you should need work on the eye. Three and the half smiles: :) :) :) Image.
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