The Simp Machine

[Horrorhead]

Yes, This is a parody on the album cover by Kraftwerk 

I'm pretty satisfied with the results and overall it came out better than I expected.

And yes, They're supposed to be stand like that 

[SirMustapha]

Damn, you, Horror! I'm writing a story that parodies the same title! Now where's my uniqueness gone?

(btw, it's not OFF fanfiction, so lower your expectations...)

Well, the idea rules. Some of the characters look a little "off" to me, though, but I really appreciate the idea. I like it very much, overall. Sorry for not being more constructive...

[Jon]

Okay, I don't know if I've said this to you before, but here it is now:

1) Work on anatomy. I would recommend visiting a bookstore and buying a couple of books to use as references. Try sketching, and keep on sketching until you're frustrated and angry, then continue sketching.

2) Work on 3D form. Draw spheres and cones and cubes, and meld them together to make different things.

3) Work on shading. Frankly, I wouldn't recommend using ANY color until you've gotten a good knowledge of shading.
DO NOT use a blending stump for shading until you've gotten a good idea for cross-hatching.

[Horrorhead]

@Don Cobra: What a coincidence! Glad that you liked the idea.

@Jon: You've said the similar thing before and I don't mind your suggestions. It's my own style and damn, it's fan-art. What about your own stuff, eh?

[Dagdamor]

Horrorhead
As much as I hate Jon, unfortunately, he can be right sometimes. Don't take his suggestions as offence, he's trying to help you with your style, even if you think it's perfect.

About your picture: my requirements are not so high as Jon's, so I think your pic is good! Homer look a bit dull here (or maybe just childish), but other Simpson family members' expressions are nice. Good work here.

[Jon]

Haha, okay, man. It's fanart and "style," so you don't have to try to improve. I could be meaner here, but I suppose enough people hate me already.

And if anyone on this board has any suggestions on my art, please, for the love of jeff, tell me them. I hardly get any, and I know for damn sure it's not because my artwork is perfect. So anyway, about my own stuff, I'm working on all the things I suggested you to work on.

[Shyster]

I'm with everyone else at this forum. If I were you, I'd stop drawing altogether as soon as possible.

[archonix]

I'm with everyone else at this forum. If I were you, I'd stop drawing altogether as soon as possible.

Except that isn't what everyone else is saying... We want to help people inprove, not make them stop. So shut it.

[c_nordlander]

I heartily agree with the man who told Shyster to shut it.

So, my critique: first of all, Michael, you have improved immensely. That's why the criticism is getting harsher as well.

So... nice colouring and composition, all over. The faces are quite on-model, and I like the expressions. You need to work on, as Jon said, proportions, particularly body proportions. Homer's stomach, for example. Think about the hair as well. Bart's is pretty good, but Marge's curls need to be rounder, and the girls' spikes need some work.

Probably your best picture so far.

[Cheiflongfuck]

I'm with everyone else at this forum. If I were you, I'd stop drawing altogether as soon as possible.

I agree. Your work is total crap and my eye almost fell out from the pain of looking at this picture. Maybe you'll get better with some hard work....ALOT of hard work!

[D.B.]

I agree. Your work is total crap and my eye almost fell out from the pain of looking at this picture. Maybe you'll get better with some hard work....ALOT of hard work!

Good god, where'd all the f*cking trolls (all with hilarious names! How do you people think these things up?[/sarcasm]) come from all of a sudden?

[Jon]

I don't understand the names.

[Vulgaris_Prime]

Someone's been handing out stupid pills to these trolls, and they've been ODing.

[EvilCupcake]

I'm with everyone else at this forum. If I were you, I'd stop drawing altogether as soon as possible.

I agree. Your work is total crap and my eye almost fell out from the pain of looking at this picture. Maybe you'll get better with some hard work....ALOT of hard work!

My God! The Idiots have figured out how to use computors ahhhhhhhhhh!

And now thats over with, nice pic Horrorhead, the characters do look a little off but apart from that its quite good 9/10

[Tigersrock144]

since I've now somehow logged on again without fixing the cookie problem I''ve had recently I can now speak out to those idiots who criticised horrorheads decent art work,
GO TO HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep it up horrorhead your sketchs rock XD I love the colouring/leaning style so those two idiots can get lost and find something good to do with their lives.