Thanks for forgiving me.
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Thanks for forgiving me.
One day Gina Vendeti felt completely guilty and went looking for friendship and forgiveness, her concience wouldn't let her sleep. Bart was the only kid who actually listened to her, actually feeling something towards her -- something he never felt before, maybe she was becoming a little bit more than just a friend. He invited her to this river outside Springfield and gave her a wild flower, and a tear formed on the corner of her eye. (I can add a little of more story) Ideas are welcome.
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That's a cool pic, sounds like a good story too. I like the detail on the rocks, water, and ofcourse, the three eyed fish!
I dont understand how those Wacom things help you to draw them, but, you've beyond perfected it. Good job!
I dont understand how those Wacom things help you to draw them, but, you've beyond perfected it. Good job!
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I love this pic! Very well-done and very cute. Please colour!
Matias--
They're basically substitutes for a mouse. You run a special pen over the tablet and the mouse moves, and touching the pen to the tablet surface simulates a click.
Matias--
They're basically substitutes for a mouse. You run a special pen over the tablet and the mouse moves, and touching the pen to the tablet surface simulates a click.
We move in circles
Balanced all the while
On a gleaming razor's edge
A perfect sphere
Colliding with our fate
This story ends where it began
Balanced all the while
On a gleaming razor's edge
A perfect sphere
Colliding with our fate
This story ends where it began
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Hmm, do I complement and risk inflating Omar's ego or do I... aw to hell with it. Great pic. I realist it's just sketchwork but I find it interesting that y ou've done Bart in red. Don't know why...
Come on, lets see some more colour.
Come on, lets see some more colour.
Our choicest plans have fallen through, our airiest castles tumbled over, because of lines we neatly drew and later neatly stumbled over.
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You'll notice the background colour is different, too. Just so he can tell what lines belong to what object or something, I guess.
We move in circles
Balanced all the while
On a gleaming razor's edge
A perfect sphere
Colliding with our fate
This story ends where it began
Balanced all the while
On a gleaming razor's edge
A perfect sphere
Colliding with our fate
This story ends where it began
Re: Thanks for forgiving me.
Are they ghosts? You can see right through them!
At this point, I've realised that I cannot give con-crit to Omar; no matter how hard I try. (See comment above) So all I can really do is humour him. It's great, as always. Even the background, although minute, is very well done; they actually look like real rocks. But if there is something that looks slightly off, it's Bart's left hand coming across Gina's hair. It should be tighter and pull her hair closer to her body as to look like there is weight on it. (Hey, I guess I can con-crit) Besides that, it's beautiful.
At this point, I've realised that I cannot give con-crit to Omar; no matter how hard I try. (See comment above) So all I can really do is humour him. It's great, as always. Even the background, although minute, is very well done; they actually look like real rocks. But if there is something that looks slightly off, it's Bart's left hand coming across Gina's hair. It should be tighter and pull her hair closer to her body as to look like there is weight on it. (Hey, I guess I can con-crit) Besides that, it's beautiful.
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Yes, you are right Ekko, a terrible mistake. I will fix it when I have the chance.Bart's left hand coming across Gina's hair. It should be tighter and pull her hair closer to her body as to look like there is weight on it.
Thanks everyone for the comments, about the colors, well....I just love red and blue a lot.
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Omar, I must warn you: if Bart will ever see this picture, he will kill you painfully
Bart, huggin' a girl, with the flower in his hand... write a will, dude
Okay, that's the only notice I have. Aside from is, it's very cute. Sweet subject, great style... excellent work.
I will wait for the colored version!
Bart, huggin' a girl, with the flower in his hand... write a will, dude
Okay, that's the only notice I have. Aside from is, it's very cute. Sweet subject, great style... excellent work.
I will wait for the colored version!
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Hey ofcourse Bart wont see it.
About Bart never hugging a girl, yes he has but I forgot the name of that episode. In fact I think he actualy felt something towards Gina in that episode "The Wandering Juvie".
Thanks for the nice compliments Sergey.
About Bart never hugging a girl, yes he has but I forgot the name of that episode. In fact I think he actualy felt something towards Gina in that episode "The Wandering Juvie".
Thanks for the nice compliments Sergey.
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Sergey, let me tell you, a guy in love (or even in slight attraction) can do the strangest things...
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Do not worry Graham, (with all due respect to Jake) I'm not Jake, what I'm getting for the compliments that you give me is nothing else but motivation -- I need that to continue with my projects, is not easy though, specially when one is sick -- sometimes the love and desire to do something is stronger than any obstacle, I just hope that god doesn't give me an obstacle I cannot handle like when I was hospitalized for 3 months (I don't want that to happen again).Hmm, do I complement and risk inflating Omar's ego or do I... aw to hell with it
Seriously, I find this whole thing of being here with you guys, as a second oportunity which I dont want to waste. It might take quite sometime for my art to be done, but if this is not done, it will not be because of me, trust me. :) (I know no one asked me about this last 3 lines, but I just wanted you to know).
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Omar, I never doubted you for a moment. I look foward to the completed picture, and hope to see many more.
Our choicest plans have fallen through, our airiest castles tumbled over, because of lines we neatly drew and later neatly stumbled over.
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Nice, 3.5 out of 5. I can give you extra credits if you bring more color in this pic.
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Season 10 will be out on Aug 07, season 11 on Dec 07, season 12 on Aug 08, season 13 on Dec 08, season 14 on Aug 09, season 15 on Dec 09, season 16 on Aug 10, season 17 on Dec 10, & season 18 on Aug 11.
Season 10 will be out on Aug 07, season 11 on Dec 07, season 12 on Aug 08, season 13 on Dec 08, season 14 on Aug 09, season 15 on Dec 09, season 16 on Aug 10, season 17 on Dec 10, & season 18 on Aug 11.
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Oh! Extra credits from Mr DJ, I can wait to get them. Not really. How can you grade us if you have no clue about art.
How can you grade something like my solo-Gina pic with a five and this one which is a far more complex with a 3.5, and the list on your grading system can go on and on with other artist, sorry to say this Man, but with all due respect, you are getting annoying.
P.S. Be more descriptive about your opinion, please. I'm sure everyone here will apreciate it.
How can you grade something like my solo-Gina pic with a five and this one which is a far more complex with a 3.5, and the list on your grading system can go on and on with other artist, sorry to say this Man, but with all due respect, you are getting annoying.
P.S. Be more descriptive about your opinion, please. I'm sure everyone here will apreciate it.
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Aw..! I have to say, I'm a sucker for sweet and cute. And this is definitely sweet and cute. Once more, even your sketches turn out great.
I'd love to see a finished version of this, I'm sure it'll be wonderful. Keep up the great work!
I'd love to see a finished version of this, I'm sure it'll be wonderful. Keep up the great work!
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