This is really good, Chris! I enjoy the choice of colours, and the bits of shading are simple, but add a lot of richness to it. I remember looking forwards to seeing the colouring, and it paid off. I really like it!
I don't really have concrit per se. I guess maybe you could try to add more bits of shading to what you already have, just to see if you can give it a bit more volume. That's more a suggestion than criticism, really... and I know shading is hard, so, no idea how I would do it myself...
Chris can't draw part II: ENDGAME
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Re: Chris can't draw part II: ENDGAME
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Re: Chris can't draw part II: ENDGAME
Your suggestion is good! I cut corners a bit with the shading because I was feeling insecure.
And I'm flattered that you like it. You're the one who encouraged me to keep going with the colouring in the first place.
And I'm flattered that you like it. You're the one who encouraged me to keep going with the colouring in the first place.
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Re: Chris can't draw part II: ENDGAME
Finally got around to finish colouring this picture, just in time for the Joker's character to be rebooted again. 
Am planning to post it on deviantArt (more like NORMIE ART amirite?), so any con-crit is welcome.
Am planning to post it on deviantArt (more like NORMIE ART amirite?), so any con-crit is welcome.
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Re: Chris can't draw part II: ENDGAME
Really? Send me a link...
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Re: Chris can't draw part II: ENDGAME
Cleaned-up version of a drawing I did in Creativity Hour. Sidero Pulverositas, Crusader of the Imperial Inquisition in the grimdark 41st millennium.
By all means tell me if anything can be improved.
By all means tell me if anything can be improved.
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