REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (The Simpsons)

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REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (The Simpsons)

Post by c_nordlander » Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:27 pm

A short Simpsons fanfic, written for May. Why are Sherri and Terri so mean to Lisa, anyway?

Prose format; drama/comedy.

(If you prefer it in some other format than .doc, just tell me.)
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Re: REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (Simpsons)

Post by Nidotamer » Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:56 pm

Doc works just fine for me! Hopefully it's the same for everyone else too.

I think I already mentioned how I mainly feel (as in, very happy with it!) but still, had some things to note.
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Re: REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (The Simpsons)

Post by gkscotty » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:57 pm

Good stuff. Makes me wonder a bit about Lisa in first grade.
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It was so much easier to blame it on Them. It was bleakly depressing to think that They were Us. If it was Them, then nothing was anyone’s fault. If it was Us, what did that make Me? After all, I’m one of Us. I must be. I’ve certainly never thought of myself as one of Them. No one ever thinks of themselves as one of Them. We’re always one of Us. It’s Them that do bad things. - Jingo, Terry Pratchett
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Re: REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (The Simpsons)

Post by missy_misery » Mon Apr 04, 2016 1:48 am

Downloading to review next week! :lisa:
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Post by missy_misery » Sun May 08, 2016 10:12 am

I loved a lot of your choices for gags here
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They combine nicely with the darkness and the stress and conflict hidden within Sherri and Terri's family. The joke they share goes a long way to explain the way they've bonded, and how they protect themselves from their parents' pickiness. Good work!
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