A short Simpsons fanfic, written for May. Why are Sherri and Terri so mean to Lisa, anyway?
Prose format; drama/comedy.
(If you prefer it in some other format than .doc, just tell me.)
REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (The Simpsons)
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Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
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Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Re: REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (Simpsons)
Doc works just fine for me! Hopefully it's the same for everyone else too.
I think I already mentioned how I mainly feel (as in, very happy with it!) but still, had some things to note.
I think I already mentioned how I mainly feel (as in, very happy with it!) but still, had some things to note.
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"Harry tore his eyes from his head and threw them into the forest. Voldemort raised his eyebrows at Harry, who could not see anything at the moment."
---- Harry Potter and the Portrait of what Looked Like a Large Pile of Ash
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Re: REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (The Simpsons)
Good stuff. Makes me wonder a bit about Lisa in first grade.
It was so much easier to blame it on Them. It was bleakly depressing to think that They were Us. If it was Them, then nothing was anyone’s fault. If it was Us, what did that make Me? After all, I’m one of Us. I must be. I’ve certainly never thought of myself as one of Them. No one ever thinks of themselves as one of Them. We’re always one of Us. It’s Them that do bad things. - Jingo, Terry Pratchett
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Re: REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (The Simpsons)
Downloading to review next week! 
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Re: REVIEWS: A Very Low-Level Enmity (The Simpsons)
I loved a lot of your choices for gags here
They combine nicely with the darkness and the stress and conflict hidden within Sherri and Terri's family. The joke they share goes a long way to explain the way they've bonded, and how they protect themselves from their parents' pickiness. Good work!
They combine nicely with the darkness and the stress and conflict hidden within Sherri and Terri's family. The joke they share goes a long way to explain the way they've bonded, and how they protect themselves from their parents' pickiness. Good work!
Now known as Lisabella! (Or Missy. Missy's good.)
Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"
Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"