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- Tony_Baritone
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Re: Offsite Fic Rec Thread!
It's so useful, it's invisible to mere mortals!
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Hmm. I'm not so sure about his main point: I tend to take the "naturalistic" view of dialogue, rather. (Though granted, I don't use a lot of "ums" and "ers" in my serious stuff. This merits thinking about.) Different strokes for different folks, I guess. And he does have some good points.
Haven't read the other links yet, will do soon...
Haven't read the other links yet, will do soon...
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Sitting with a harpoon
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- Tony_Baritone
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Dialogue is always a challenge. I think all good writers know that real people aren't as routinely snappy and witty as movie characters, and so a sequence composed of one bon mot after another can reach diminishing returns in a hurry. By the same token, if you want to pull your hair out, watch a program for a week and check the ads that they play three times per hour. Bad, contrived writing gets exponentially worse with repetition.
The trick to using mundanity as emblematic of "reality" is to either make it revelatory about the character, or to use it alongside your most dramatic moments to underscore the suddenness of it all. Similarly, I think a sliding scale exists as to when a character should break out the devastating lines, when to play it straight, and all points in between. As always, YMMV.
The trick to using mundanity as emblematic of "reality" is to either make it revelatory about the character, or to use it alongside your most dramatic moments to underscore the suddenness of it all. Similarly, I think a sliding scale exists as to when a character should break out the devastating lines, when to play it straight, and all points in between. As always, YMMV.
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Re: Offsite Fic Rec Thread!
I agree with Tony!
Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
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Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
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Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
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- missy_misery
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Re: Offsite Fic Rec Thread!
Bumping this for a wonderful new fic I just found!
Five Things Maggie Simpson Never Said, by soundingsea. Futurefic that examines Maggie's life in various alternate realities. Beautifully actualized and written.
Five Things Maggie Simpson Never Said, by soundingsea. Futurefic that examines Maggie's life in various alternate realities. Beautifully actualized and written.
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