STORY: Innocence, a Novel
- c_nordlander
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STORY: Innocence, a Novel
Another short story that I wrote a while back. Realistic, unlike most of my work. It doesn't really have a driving plot: instead, it's a series of small vignettes that show how bits of your innocence are eroded away as part of the process of growing up. No objectionable content.
And no, it's not an actual novel, just 3 pages.
If you want to read it, drop me a line and I'll mail it to you. All constructive criticism is of course greatly appreciated.
And no, it's not an actual novel, just 3 pages.
If you want to read it, drop me a line and I'll mail it to you. All constructive criticism is of course greatly appreciated.
Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
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Re: STORY: Innocence, a Novel
I'll volunteer; I'm in the middle of writing something very different myself, and am very excited about it. BTW, Gulliver63@yahoo.com
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Re: STORY: Innocence, a Novel
Very nice - very big on description. Always nice to get a different view on things across the pond. You've got a good way of connecting with that child that we've left behind so many years ago.
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Re: STORY: Innocence, a Novel
Please do send it along! I'd love to read.
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Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"