A horror/SF (?) story. An ordinary guy gets the compulsive idea that he is actually an alien replicant. How will he find out? How *can* you find out?
All critique is of course greatly appreciated.
Note: I originally wrote this story as a radio play (though it ended up being way too short to qualify). Imagine it being spoken aloud for the best effect.
STORY: Deep Cover
- c_nordlander
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STORY: Deep Cover
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Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
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Re: STORY: Deep Cover
Neat! The first thing that caught my eye was the reference to the brain cortex, which I thought was interesting and very relevent to the story. It succeeded in making my skin crawl at the end - mission accomplished. Well done.
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Re: STORY: Deep Cover
Delightfully spine tingling, Chris!
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Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"