REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)
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REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)
A Venture Brothers Christmas request for Missy: a story about female VB characters working together towards some goal. Roughly a year after the ending of Season 7, Triana receives a mission from Dean Venture and feels honour-bound to help.
Might feel a bit pointless, but I mean to write more in this universe.
Hope you enjoy!
Might feel a bit pointless, but I mean to write more in this universe.
Hope you enjoy!
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)
Yee, going to read this soon, thank you Chris!
Now known as Lisabella! (Or Missy. Missy's good.)
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Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)
As always, Chris, you know EXACTLY what I want you deliver it up. Gosh this reminded me of how much I miss Triana, and how well you write her.
Ahh Triana using her powers! Warrina! Respect between them! And Triana's road trip paying off, and now everyone's in Team Venture. Perfect! This was so good. and the little glimpse of Orpheus in the beginning was A++.
Ahh Triana using her powers! Warrina! Respect between them! And Triana's road trip paying off, and now everyone's in Team Venture. Perfect! This was so good. and the little glimpse of Orpheus in the beginning was A++.
Now known as Lisabella! (Or Missy. Missy's good.)
Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"
Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)
Seeing high praise like this is just... wow! Thank you, and very happy you liked it.
I'll almost certainly write a follow-up to this at some point. EDIT: And I have done, see link below.
EDIT: I would actually have liked to have Molotov being the one helping Triana with her mission (and you know I just like her as a character), but it felt like having her show up would have required a lot more explaining without making her seem like a deus ex machina. Warriana made more immediate sense since she's an action heroine who actually lives in Tophet Tower, plus she deserves more fanworks exposure.
I'll almost certainly write a follow-up to this at some point. EDIT: And I have done, see link below.
EDIT: I would actually have liked to have Molotov being the one helping Triana with her mission (and you know I just like her as a character), but it felt like having her show up would have required a lot more explaining without making her seem like a deus ex machina. Warriana made more immediate sense since she's an action heroine who actually lives in Tophet Tower, plus she deserves more fanworks exposure.
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Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)
You're so welcome and YES PLEASE I want this!
Now known as Lisabella! (Or Missy. Missy's good.)
Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"
Creator of the Waving Universe
Crack!Fic, The Marge Simpson Way: "Just then, Sir Lancelot rode up on a white horse and saved Joan of Arc. They got married and lived in a spaceship. The end." - Tales from the Public Domain, "Hot Child In The City"
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)
If it's of interest to anyone, I've written a short sequel story, in the Creativity Works thread: Generation Next. Still pretty unpolished (I'll post it in the Writing forum once I've finalised it), but complete.
Pretty little baby
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.
Pretty little monster
Went to the good school
Left with honours
Brand new tycoon
Sitting with a harpoon
-- Mother Mother, "Business Man"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me for more information.