Creativity Hour works thread
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More spess mehreens. Con-crit welcome, I know how unfinished it is.
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Feels like I'm finally close to completion with the colouring. Con-crit welcome as always!
EDIT: More progress.
EDIT: More progress.
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Unfortunately, due to Graham and myself moving house, I won't be able to attend Creativity night in Discord for a few weeks. I'll still post something in this thread when I can, or save it up for when we have the scanner set up. Keep watching the skis!
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Have fun moving house!
It was so much easier to blame it on Them. It was bleakly depressing to think that They were Us. If it was Them, then nothing was anyone’s fault. If it was Us, what did that make Me? After all, I’m one of Us. I must be. I’ve certainly never thought of myself as one of Them. No one ever thinks of themselves as one of Them. We’re always one of Us. It’s Them that do bad things. - Jingo, Terry Pratchett
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The actual moving is over, it's just that for a number of reasons, all our stuff is still in storage. Really looking forward to chatting with you all again, but until then, watch for my stuff on the board. Or not.
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The start of a fanfiction for the 2019 Joker movie, but you don't need to know much about the backstory other than: 1) there's a guy called the Joker, and 2) he's kind of bad news. This story is from the POV of Sophie, the woman he had a one-sided crush on.
Content warning for... just about everything. Seriously. I'm not exaggerating here. However, the continuation will be lighter, possibly.
Also, some tense changes. They're actually a feature, not a bug; if you look carefully, you'll see what triggers the change from past to present tense and vice versa.
Some of my illustrations to go with it:
Title image
kidnapping (old drawing)
making out
Content warning for... just about everything. Seriously. I'm not exaggerating here. However, the continuation will be lighter, possibly.
Also, some tense changes. They're actually a feature, not a bug; if you look carefully, you'll see what triggers the change from past to present tense and vice versa.
Some of my illustrations to go with it:
Title image
kidnapping (old drawing)
making out
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Shall probably check it out tomorrow! Been coding my game all day.
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It's hard to really say much without it becoming all about how I'm just sick to death of the Joker. (most overexposed fictional character 2003-2023) I can't pretend that doesn't bias my opinion a little, sorry.
But this is a well written and very grim piece, though I'm afraid I don't get the purpose of the tense changes and am lacking context for what's happening. I get enough to know I wouldn't want any part in it.
But this is a well written and very grim piece, though I'm afraid I don't get the purpose of the tense changes and am lacking context for what's happening. I get enough to know I wouldn't want any part in it.
It was so much easier to blame it on Them. It was bleakly depressing to think that They were Us. If it was Them, then nothing was anyone’s fault. If it was Us, what did that make Me? After all, I’m one of Us. I must be. I’ve certainly never thought of myself as one of Them. No one ever thinks of themselves as one of Them. We’re always one of Us. It’s Them that do bad things. - Jingo, Terry Pratchett
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Love it.most overexposed fictional character 2003-2023
Thanks a lot for reading and for your kind words, even if the subject isn't to your liking. It is a very dark story. I have no excuse for it other than that sometimes we need to exorcise our demons.
As for the tense changes, the story turns into present tense whenever the Joker is on-page. It's meant to show how his presence preoccupies Sophie's mind and throws it off-kilter.
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Tried to make a start on some more sprite art. The close-up kind of ended up looking like Triana from Venture Brothers, but that wasn't intentional.
EDIT: Also apologies for tininess. Nothing really to see here...
EDIT: Also apologies for tininess. Nothing really to see here...
Last edited by c_nordlander on Sun May 07, 2023 9:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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It's hard to see at that scale, TBH. And zooming in in Chrome makes it blurry. But it looks like a good start.
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Thanks. And apologies. I did them in Make Pixel Art, but I accidentally deleted them, and have no good graphical tools on this computer that I know how to use, so no better resolution, I'm afraid.
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Started cleanup. Some guy who went to Mars to join SpaceX's strikebreaker force or something.
Original picture here.
Con-crit welcome as always.
Original picture here.
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I like the figure, he's very boxy but that works great. His shoulders seem a little lopsided though, the gradient on them doesn't quite match.
My main problem is a perspective one: I think the car looks a little small, he seems way too tall compared to it. I think moving the horizon line up might help it, not sure.
My main problem is a perspective one: I think the car looks a little small, he seems way too tall compared to it. I think moving the horizon line up might help it, not sure.
It was so much easier to blame it on Them. It was bleakly depressing to think that They were Us. If it was Them, then nothing was anyone’s fault. If it was Us, what did that make Me? After all, I’m one of Us. I must be. I’ve certainly never thought of myself as one of Them. No one ever thinks of themselves as one of Them. We’re always one of Us. It’s Them that do bad things. - Jingo, Terry Pratchett
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Thank you! I totally agree with you about the perspective, will try to fix it.
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