mr burns picture

Abe_Simpson · Post by **Abe_Simpson** » Sun Nov 30, 2003 2:39 pm

ok... this is my mr burns picture that i did in photoshop. i need to improve it though, so critique away... i'm still not sure if this is the correct place to post it though...

FunkyMonk · Post by **FunkyMonk** » Sun Nov 30, 2003 3:51 pm

oo, good pic! It does need just a little improvement like you said though...and I don't think I should be talking. I make pics in paint that look horrible, heh. And as for the right place to put this pic, I think the critic's corner is alright, because after all, you're looking for people to give you some constructive criticism, aren't you? Well, even if you aren't, I'm going to give you some anyway. The pic is very good,*looks at Mr. Burns poster in room again* and I have a Mr. Burns poster with the same menacing look on him, and if I'm not mistaking his teeth show when he grins. You know, they stick out of his mouth like an overbite.

Abe_Simpson · Post by **Abe_Simpson** » Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:10 pm

that's what i forgot... i knew it was missing something... i'll try to fix it

JoeyGus · Post by **JoeyGus** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 9:12 pm

It's a good picture, but the lip is a bit on the big side and the overbite should stick out more. Also it may just be me but are the ears a lil' higher than supposed to be?

Kif White · Post by **Kif White** » Wed Dec 10, 2003 9:46 pm

The others covered the main points: that his upper lip should stick out more and the teeth. The back of his head and ear should also curve out more and he should have an arc-shaped line beneath his closest eye. Apart from that, a good start

Abe_Simpson · Post by **Abe_Simpson** » Thu Dec 11, 2003 7:41 pm

here is my edited mr burns. i have drawn the teeth about 7 times and they just don't look right... what do you think i should do? i'm looking an adrianna's direction, considering she has a poster, but if anyone else has any suggestions they would be greatly appreciated.

Kif White · Post by **Kif White** » Thu Dec 11, 2003 8:01 pm

Better. I think what you need to do is have the teeth getting more obscured by hit upper lip as they get further from it, if you get what I mean? Have them sticking out fully at the front of his lip, but as they get closer to the edge of his mouth, having them sticking out less, thus looking not so big.

Horrorhead · Post by **Horrorhead** » Fri Dec 12, 2003 8:51 am

You forgot that circle under his eye. You know what I mean, that circle what all the "older" Simpsons characters have or when they're getting old.

FunkyMonk · Post by **FunkyMonk** » Sun Dec 14, 2003 12:54 pm

Much better

.....What "circle"? Do you mean like the ones skinner has under his eyes? As far as I know he's the only one who has those. Burns doesn't, at least I don't think.

And Skinner's not even that old. In "Skinner's Sense of Snow", it said he was 40.

JoeyGus · Post by **JoeyGus** » Sun Dec 14, 2003 3:15 pm

He'd have to be older than that to be a Vietnam veteran but they never grow up and also Mr. Burns he does have those aging marks. It's alittle better.

djwhitaker2004 · Post by **djwhitaker2004** » Sat Jan 17, 2004 7:20 pm

Those pictures of Mr.Burns almost scare me. But it good a little. And yes I really need to see a circle under Burns's eyes.

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