REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)

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REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)

Post by c_nordlander » Thu Dec 22, 2022 10:22 pm

A Venture Brothers Christmas request for Missy: a story about female VB characters working together towards some goal. Roughly a year after the ending of Season 7, Triana receives a mission from Dean Venture and feels honour-bound to help.

Might feel a bit pointless, but I mean to write more in this universe.

Hope you enjoy!
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)

Post by missy_misery » Mon Apr 17, 2023 8:49 pm

Yee, going to read this soon, thank you Chris!
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)

Post by missy_misery » Tue Apr 25, 2023 10:36 pm

As always, Chris, you know EXACTLY what I want you deliver it up. Gosh this reminded me of how much I miss Triana, and how well you write her.

Ahh Triana using her powers! Warrina! Respect between them! And Triana's road trip paying off, and now everyone's in Team Venture. Perfect! This was so good. and the little glimpse of Orpheus in the beginning was A++.
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)

Post by c_nordlander » Wed Apr 26, 2023 7:11 pm

Seeing high praise like this is just... wow! Thank you, and very happy you liked it.

I'll almost certainly write a follow-up to this at some point. EDIT: And I have done, see link below.

EDIT: I would actually have liked to have Molotov being the one helping Triana with her mission (and you know I just like her as a character), but it felt like having her show up would have required a lot more explaining without making her seem like a deus ex machina. Warriana made more immediate sense since she's an action heroine who actually lives in Tophet Tower, plus she deserves more fanworks exposure.
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)

Post by missy_misery » Sun Apr 30, 2023 7:30 am

You're so welcome and YES PLEASE I want this!
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Re: REVIEWS: Saving Sirena (Venture Brothers)

Post by c_nordlander » Mon Aug 21, 2023 9:05 pm

If it's of interest to anyone, I've written a short sequel story, in the Creativity Works thread: Generation Next. Still pretty unpolished (I'll post it in the Writing forum once I've finalised it), but complete.
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