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c_nordlander
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This Is CHRISTINAAAAAAAAAAA!
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Count up my money, I still do the math.
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Terry Y
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Stolen Borrowed from the MST3K boards.
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c_nordlander
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The first draft of my entry, "The Garden of Forking Pasts", is finished now. A finalised version will be posted soon.
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c_nordlander
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And here it is, in all its finalised glory, "The Garden of Forking Pasts", weighing in at 2993 words (excluding disclaimers and other extraneous material).
Beginning: Fry suffers from a mysterious disease
Middle: Someone gets... AMNESIA!
End: Fry decides to return to the way things were
A bit more depressing than I originally planned. Warning: alternate universe character death.
Beginning: Fry suffers from a mysterious disease
Middle: Someone gets... AMNESIA!
End: Fry decides to return to the way things were
A bit more depressing than I originally planned. Warning: alternate universe character death.
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Count up my money, I still do the math.
-- Young Scrolls, "Elsweyr Palace"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me to discuss.
Count up my money, I still do the math.
-- Young Scrolls, "Elsweyr Palace"
Now offering writing commissions! Fanfiction or original, PM me to discuss.
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missy_misery
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This is really, really beautiful, Chris - you nail down the emotional cores of characters so well. Another wonderful combination of emotions on display here - the darkness is properly leavened with humor. Excellent stuff.
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Creator of the Waving Universe
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Kif White
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Extremely impressive. As usual, your writing and characterisation shines here, particuarly your descriptions and Fry's emotions. But I have to give extra special kudos to...
Overall, a fantastic read. I can see why you took the top award
Overall, a fantastic read. I can see why you took the top award
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"Know the conflict within before facing the conflict without."
Now Watching: Babylon 5 - Season 3
Now Playing: Dragon Age Origins: Awakening, Pokemon Heart Gold
Now Reading: Catch 22
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Terry Y
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Excellent stuff. No wonder you won! A great little story that I'd personally like to see fleshed out into something longer. Kudos!
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